Asmodean wrote:
Oi! Here's a teaser for a 'fic I've been working on for a little bit now.
Hopefully, I'll have it finished by next weekend(depending on how much time
I have). The fic is a crossover fic based on Ranma, and a cardgame/RPG
called Shadowfist(the RPG is called Feng Shui). Anyway, on with the teaser.
Imagine it to fow something like a movie ad on TV, just a bunch of cut
scenes put together.
BEGIN TEASER
Open on a man with brown hair, silver eyes and a eurasian cast to him
stumbling down an alley, he stumbles and almost falls to the ground. Behind
him fighting between several people can a large... thing can be seen. The
man is wounded and bleeding.
Cut to Dr. Tofus clinic, with the man from the fight, lying in a bed
sleeping, Dr. Tofu and Ranma are watching him and talking.
Cut to the Tendo Dojo, the entire dojo is in flames and a burnished bronze
humanoid is standing over Ranma(who has a huge hole in his abdomen), and
Akane, who is only partially consious. The humanoid turns away from the two
to face the dojo, where a figure can be seen walking out of the flames.
Cut to Ranma and Akane standing infront of the Tendo dojo, next to a dragon,
talking with it as it visibly withers and weakens. The dragon reaches out
with a claw to touch Ranma and Akanes shoulder, then seems to collapse in on
itself and vanish.
Finally, we see Ranma lifting a small silver pin made in the shape of a
dragons head out of a box and pinning it ono the collar of his shirt. Fade
out on the pin.
END TEASER
Well, any intrest in this little concoction of mine? Yes? No? Kill it now?
I've got one chapter of about 7-8 done now. If I get a good responce, I'll
go ahead and post what I've completed(maybe that'll give me more incentive
to work on it) ;)
-Josh
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I think it sounds very cool, please finish and post ;)
Entomorph
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