this was great.  I am realy starting to get into this story.  I like the 
way that you are detailing the charicterization of all of hte importaint 
players and its nice or maby just quaint to see the story without genoms 
perspective for a change.  Normaly you get that new assistant to the 
charman deal plotting thing but this is nice.  good work and keep it up.

by the way at the end is the ommistion of what caused the explotion 
intentional or did you just forget or are you still deciding? enough 
variambles in one question for you? hehe:)
shade and sweet water
skywise
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