Nicely symbolic. Fairly well-witten, good story concept. I wasn't really
wild about the ending....sounded a bit too much like the end of a campfire
ghost story ("And they say, when the moon is full, you can still hear the
screams of the lost scout troop."). 
   Liked the main body....the denial, the way what was really going on was
hinted at but held back. Very good job there.
   I'm afraid I'm not a very good critic on this....I have an deep-seated
dislike of suicide fics, and I prefer happy ones to dark ones. But that's
just me. :)
   Good job, and hurry up with the next one.

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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