At 13:06 12/06/96 -0500, you wrote:

On Wed, 12 Jun 1996, Philip Mak wrote:

On Tue, 11 Jun 1996, Stormwalker wrote:

  Evening, Tendo Dojo.

	"RANMA-SAMA!!"
	Ranma muttered something unprintable as he frantically dodged the
ribbon Kuno Kodachi was trying to reel him in with. 
	#'Least Akane ain't home yet,# he thought at he bounded along the
rooftop trying to elude his would-be wife/concubine/mistress/sex-slave,
#no _way_ she wouldn't blame be for-HEY!#
	A moment's innatention, and Ranma's cause was lost as the Black
Rose snared his ankle and had him mummy-wrapped up to his neck before he
could react.
	"Now my dearest," Kodachi smiled as the pulled a massive boquet of
midnight black roses out of a pocket dimension, "let us embrace

forever."

	Ranma had no idea what was in those roses, but past experience
told him to expect anything from paralysis to mind control.  Not
suprisingly (although doing so with both arms bound to his side and his
legs tied together made it slightly impressive), he leaped from the roof
and flipped to the side as Kodachi leapt toward him.  For her part,
Kodachi was too suprised at her beloved's avoidance to land

correctly; she

stumbled, tripped and dropped the boquet off the roof as she and Ranma
fell heavily.
	Ranma was strugging out of his bonds as he heard a familiar sneeze
come where he figured the front door was and rolled over to see Kodachi
peering over the edge with an expression that terrified him more

than any

she had worn before... utter and complete sorbiety heavily leavened with
sanity.  Unable to resist his morbid curiosity, he rolled close

enough to

to see the front door and froze in shock.
	"I never did test that love potion on females...." Kodachi muttered
softly as Tendo Kasumi stared up into her eyes, black rose petals

still in

her hair.

******

Ok, here's my part (Please excuse my spelling):


        "Oh my...." Kausmi managed to stammer out before she collapsed.
        Akane comes through the door.
        "Kasumi! Where...AH! Kasumi! WHat's happend!" Yells Akne as

she sees

Kasumi's limp from lying there. "Ranma! What did you do to her!" She
demanded, as Kodachi crept away.
        "Errr...I...um...ah..." Ranma mermered.
        Akane Grabs the front of Ranma's shirt and pulls him Close.

"Ranma!

If you have hurt Kasumi! I'll..."
        "Don't worry, she's just out-cold." Said Nabiki, who stood

behind them.

        "Is that true Nabiki?" Said Akane.
        Soun comed out of the Door Now.
        "AHHHHH! KASUMI! AHHHH!" He breaks out in tears.
        Now, Genma comes out.
        "Come on Ranma, help me get he into her bed." Ranma and Genma

take

Kasumi into the house and place her in her bed.
        Akane lays a wet cloth on Kasumi's forhead. 
        "So, Ranma, what did you do to her? Hmmm?" Said Nabiki, slyly.
        "No! It was Kodachi! She had these flowers and..."
        "Kodachi! Those flowers could have anything in them!" Said Akane.
        Ukyo come to the door. She knocks at the door for a while then
enders on her own. "Hello!" She says, and Nabiki greets her."
        "Ukyo, inresting to see you here." said Nabiki.
        "I was just bringing some food for ranchan, but I saw Kodachi
Leaving here, did she do something to Ranchan?"
        "She tried to do something to Ranma, but Kasumi got hit insted."
        "Kasumi! How is she doing?"
        "Come see for your self." They go into Kasumi's bedroom. Ukyo

come

to stand over her.
        "Hmm, out cold...." Says Ukyo, takening a quick pulse.
        Kasumi opens her eyes, and Looks up at Ukyo
        "Ukyo...I never noticed...how buetiful you are..." Says Kasumi.
        Everyone falls down and Bugs out...but Ukyo just stands

there, frozen...

(I've never written a fanfic before, so feel free to hit me over the head 
with a mallet/spatula/bonbori if this turns out bad. :)

UKYOU quickly stepped back from KASUMI.

UKYOU: "Hey, what do you think you're doing. I'm a girl!"
KASUMI: (in a hurt voice) "But Ukyou, don't you love me?"
SOUN: "Waaaaaaah! My oldest daughter is a lesbian!"
UKYOU: "Love you? How could I love you? You're a girl!"
KASUMI: "Oh, my."

RANMA pulls UKYOU aside.

RANMA: (whispering) "I think she got drugged by one of Kodachi's love 
	potions."

Like I said, I'm new at writing fanfics, I don't know how to continue. 
Anyone want to add to this? :) Or has this chain fanfic died already by 
the time I managed to get this part written? <g>

I'll take it from here:

RANMA:  Can't you just go along with it, until we can figure out a cure?
UKYOU:  Oh, Ranchan, for you, I'd do just about anything, but do I have 
to do this?
RANMA:  Yeah.  We don't know what this drug'll make her do.

[NABIKI comes around the corner and walks back into the room.]

NABIKI:  Well, I called Dr. Tofu.  He'll be here any second now.
SOUN:  My poor daughter.  Kasumi.  How could you do this?  WAAAHHH!!!
GENMA:  That was a very smart thing to do, Nabiki.  Dr. Tofu will 
certainly help.
AKANE:  Ummm, Nabiki?  Are you sure that was such a good idea?  Remember 
how he gets when he's around Kasumi.
NABIKI: (eyes twinkling and holding up camera)  I know.

I just love these chain fanfics...


Akane: What do you have planned?
Nabiki: You'll see....
(She smiles that cute and evil smile of her's)
(Ukyo comes over the Kasumi)
Kasumi: Oh, my love you have returned! 
(She gets out of bed and flops into Ukyo's arms.)
Ukyo: Ummm..yea...
(Ryoga comes intot eh room.)
Ryoga: Ah! Where am I...hey! Akane!....WHAT!!!! WHAT'S KASUMI DOING!!!!!
(Ryoga's nose begins to gush, and he collapses.)
Ranma: Man, Ryoga, haven't you seen two women in love before...
(A spatula hits him in the fact)
Ranma: OUCH!





Geoff Walker, THE TYRANT PAX, Hentai Omega
Offical Grand Inqusistor Of the Cult of Nabiki Tendo
"Well, there goes the buisness, Hyuck! At least I got 
paid!"