Subject: Re: [FFML] Misa's Fic Reviews Part 3
From: "Peter L. Ward" <falcon@best.com>
Date: 6/11/1996, 4:59 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

1.  A Guided Tour or Even a patient person has a Breaking Point
BY Sebastian  <http://enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de/~bastian/>

This was a truly funny story. Giggle. I especially liked the title :)

Yeah, you had to wonder how that poor guide puts up with all these visitors not 
listening and taking that fateful fall ^_^



2. Tenchi goes to Disneyland!!
BY Peter L. Ward          falcon@best.com

This is an interesting premise... you need to flesh it out A LOT
though. It seemed fragmented (yes I know it was only a preview).
Be sure to post the finished version.


It got canned, folks.  Basically, it just wasn't working out as well as I had 
hoped, and besides that, I only got one comment on it.  Maybe someone might be 
able to run with the idea better than I could while I concentrate on getting 
AMS #12 done (beta readers have seen the preview on this one...).

I do have other ideas floating around in my head, though.  A Macross Plus 
fanfic may be one of them (set several months after the conclusion and 
centering around the aftermath).  As soon as I get my filthy claws on more 
Slayers, I might do at least one fanfic based on that series as well.

Hmmmm....Lina Inverse wiping out Disneyland using the Dragon Slave....naaaaah!


4. Right Side of the Ledger
BY "Richard D. Lawson" <sterman@sprynet.com>

Hmmm... I really don't like old Nabsie too much, so I liked this fic. I have
great hopes that Nabiki will become less of a mercenary someday :) Well
written :).

I must say that the resulting series (Thy Inward Love) is very good.  Part four 
with the Kunos still has me reeling with the development of the characters.  
One of the few instances where I have any liking for anyone by the name of 
Kuno.


5. "Itsu mo, 'Ucchan'"
BY mi-chan@ix.netcom.com (Washu's #1 Student)

This was just... simply... wonderful. I loved every line. Thanks for writing
it and sharing it with us.


Can't think of anything to add to these comments ^_^

-misachan
Marisa Price
marisa@value.net
Peter L. Ward          falcon@best.com          Kyusaku on IRC #Anime!
Caretaker of the Urd Shrine (http://www.best.com/~falcon/urdhome.htm)

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