On Fri, 7 Jun 1996, Michael Carlson wrote:
Keeping everyone in a state of suspense agian, aren't you. Keep this up
and everyone will be camping at your house. I still think you should have
Ryoga help out in the fight. That is what he is trained for.
Well, 31-41 is still kinda raw. I still need to put a few more bits in but
as I finally got to the end of TP3 I had planned I thought I'd better send
it out, then edit later. ;)
I will go over 17-30 to make sure I like that section(some bit to add
there too but fewer) before posting.
I finished first before overall editing becuase I wanted to be DONE that
part. ;) There are quite a few glaring grammar mistakes and a few
spellings as well but I'll do that when I go over it again.
I was more concerned over plot than grammar right now though.
Twister.
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