On Wed, 5 Jun 1996, Neill Walker wrote:
| From: Caroline Ann Seawright <kunoichi@yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au>
| Date: June 5, 1996 9:04 PM
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| Well, I think it was just the way it was written, not that he didn't
| commit seppuku... *shrug* Better ask the author about that one.
Heh. I thought posting it here would get his attention. Apparantly not...
but I seem to have got a few others' attention. ^_^ Now I just have to
interest them in MY writing. READ IT!! I WANT C&C! I HAVEN'T EVEN RECIEVED
A SINGLE RESPONSE!! YOU'RE MAKING ME LOOK LIKE AN AOL USER!
Actually, it did get my attention. I had some prollems with my account
yesterday, so I couldn't respond. :P
Thanks for the C&C, gang, there's a revision in the works. :)
So far, only one person liked the arrow out of nowhere, and most thought
it should be shrapnel, or something more high-tech. Maybe I'll change it,
maybe I won't. The arrow was the first thing to pop into my head, and I
sorta like it. Personally, I think anything else would sound a little
contrived. Of course, somebody shooting at Akane and not Ranma also seems
a little unlikely. At first, I was going to have him kill several
attackers after her death, but I preferred having him show some emotion
other than anger for once. Ranma's first response to an attack is always
to retaliate...for once I wanted him to be a little less super-human.
We'll see what happens, I suppose. :D
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