Would someone please read the little scene I posted this afternoon?  I
don't need in depth C&C, just a little guidance.  Is the style ok?  I
don't want to write a big story if no one likes the way it's written...

Thanks,
-Neill
-- 
"Fleshy-headed mutant, are you friendly?"
"No, eh!  Radiation has made me an enemy of civilization!"

P.S.  Has anyone tried the Exchange Client for Win95?  Is it worth
downloading?