| Subject: Re: A Lesson In Love Ch. 9 (Confessions) (NEW!!) |
| From: Caroline Ann Seawright |
| Date: 6/3/1996, 1:44 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Nabiki rather touching. Although, I'm still not sure why you wanted to bring Akari into it...
Well, you want Akari wandering around and hurting because somehow, very OOCly, Ryouga has totally forgotten about her? That's rather... a stupid thing to have happen as it totally negates the manga ending. This is to be *after* the manga ending. Screwing up Akari-Ryouga without even writing about them just sucks, really. Kun-chan...