Subject: Re: A Lesson In Love Ch. 9 (Confessions) (NEW!!)
From: Caroline Ann Seawright
Date: 6/3/1996, 1:44 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Nabiki rather touching.
   Although, I'm still not sure why you wanted to bring Akari into it...

Well, you want Akari wandering around and hurting because somehow, very
OOCly, Ryouga has totally forgotten about her? That's rather... a stupid
thing to have happen as it totally negates the manga ending. This is to
be *after* the manga ending. Screwing up Akari-Ryouga without even writing
about them just sucks, really.

Kun-chan...