OK, I'm going to try and give some C&C, figuring that if I
give it, maybe more people will give it to me. (So to speak.)
The main reason I don't do it is...well...I'm easy to please.
"Hey, it was great!  Don't change a thing!" is nice to hear,
but not exactly helpful.

I read all of these at 2:30 in the morning (I have insomnia),
so my opinions might be biased towards sleep...

"Itsu mo, Ucchan"

Very well done.  Translation would be nice.  I know some
fanfic Japanese by now, but not *this* much.  There were at
least six words that slipped by me.  Ukyou was very well 
written (despite not being there).  I like the letter style.

"Tears of the Heart"

Also good, and less Japanese here.  Ukyou and Ryouga seemed
a little too mellow, but other than that...Ranma and Akane
were extremely well done. (You can see why I don't C&C...it
tends to get boring.)

"The Right Side of the Ledger"

Good 3-D Nabiki and Kuno.  I admire this because I have
trouble writing Nabiki, and Richard gets it right away.  
The Shakespeare was OK, I'd see if some more appropriate
quotes could be found.  Maybe Kuno could show off his 
T.S. Eliot?

As I said, this may not help, but I feel guilty not saying 
anything.

--Sean Gaffney
--"You git!  I thought you were dead!  Git git git!" - Benny, No Future