Subject: Re[2]: [FFML] Oh My God - Chapter 15 (part b)
From: joe.ortiz@ci.slc.ut.us
Date: 5/28/1996, 7:57 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

        Three cheers to Brett for a job well done.  There was exciting 
     fight scenes (without being too 'gore' explicit), a believable 'good 
     guys' triumph over 'evil' story, and there are still many possiblities 
     for this (finished) story to go.  
     
        For example, there is the teaser which has Brett granting the 
     'wish' to the Ranma 1/2 story line.  Moreover, there is the still 
     unfinished 'road rally' for Keiichi & Brett to run (many possiblities 
     here). 
     
        I hope that there will be future stories to read..........
     
     Joe 'Oz' Ortiz
     joe.ortiz@ci.slc.ut.us
     
     
     
     <Fluff warning>
     Personal Comment to other comments:
     
I mean pulling out a shotgun is quite reasonable.. but I didn't want to go 
overboard....
     
     If you want a shotgun, how about the Atchison.  12 gauge shotgun, can 
     be fired fully automatic. It can put a very large number of 
     projectiles into the air in a disturbingly short period of time. Very 
     nasty against unarmored targets.
     
     < As far as the weapons used by the security daemons, modern firearms 
     are ok, but the use of 'fantasy-sci-fi' weapons might have even been 
     more appropriate?? Such as a "Starwars - light-saber"? or a "Aliens - 
     assault rifle"?  Oh well...that's just my 2 cents worth>