On Mon, 27 May 1996, Marisa Price wrote:

Well... here it is. My lemon story. You have to read the
whole darn thing to get to it though. Lemme know if it is
too cheese.

-misa

   (Story deleted. My only complaint is that Akane seems extremely naive 
for sixteen. She has little personal experience of boys, yes, but surely 
she's heard things from friends. And I really can't believe she's 
never...um...been in the mood for love before. There was Dr. Tofu--and 
Shinnosuke, for that matter. But I suppose than can be overlooked in 
this sort of story.)

        Ranma stood there for a second before saying, in a loud
whisper, "Ya-----taaaaa!!"* And went off to bed with a smile
on his face.

   Was he planning all that?! What a _jerk_!

Mousse: I feel the urge to strike him!
Akane: Be my guest...

   ROTFLMBO! (It's "yatta," with two t's, by the way.)

   Good job. (It's true. Women do write better lemons.)

Paul Corrigan
budgie@insomnia3.dorms.utoledo.edu