Hey all-- if you are just darn confused about the 20 different versions of
L in L I have sent out (shoot even -I- am confused), #1 - 6 are now on the
remailer, courtesy of WW (THANKS!! hugs!!).


ANYWAY... if you want to read it and say "OH--- she fixed that I didn't
realize that when I was reading Part 7 or the Side Story... etc..." ...
well, please go back and check out the revised copies.

Things I especially changed:


1. The Okonomiyki scene (#4) -- makes a little more sense becasue it 
        shows what Akane is thinking and why she gets mad.

2. I moved some stuff out of part #6 to part #7 for continunity's sake.
        #6 is basically the same, but I cut out a big chunk, pasted
        it into #7 and reworded it.


Not on Remailer yet--- BUT....


1. Part #7--- Akane finds out about Ryouga added...

2. Lemonish side-story added... still being improved, so if you want
        to wait for the newer version, can the one I posted last night.


Hope this helps!

sorry for all the confusion--- I am such a perfectionist... :P


-misachan

 
Marisa Price
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