And now, with my legendary punctuality, C&C on a series posted over a
week ago. :)

And I reply to it, a week late?

   I liked it, myself. All to often, a lemon fanfic contains only sex
scenes.
Seamus: Ain't that what lemon's are made fer?

Heh... arigatou. ^_^

   Well, sort of. Kun-chan gives us characters who actually care about
each other, and motivation behind the act. The character's lovemaking is
just that, making love as oppossed to lust. This alone justifies making it
a series.

I got sick of all the lust stuff... :p  It's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
boring.

   The fact that the series has a plot along with it is the other factor
in its favor. And quite a plot! Kun-chan has miraculously managed to come
up with the happiest resolution to the series that I've ever seen.
Everyone pairs up, finds true love and a companion for life, and settles
down to breed like rabbits. No grudges, no Ukyo pining away (a staple of
continuation stories), heck, even Kodachi and Azusa get someone, a feat I

Kun-chan no like sad/depressing stuff that much... nor violent stuff...

had long held to be impossible barring a few months in a government
brainscrubbing facility. And it's all done while having the lovers act IN

*smirk*

CHARACTER. Wow.

Kun-chan likes to try to keep things IC... ^_^

   The, um, scenes of a private nature were well written, interesting,
accurate.....I'm gonna stop before I embarrass myself.

*giggle*

   Overall, a very effective counteragent against a particularly
depressing sadfic. If this doesn't cheer you up, well, you're weird.

Or you just don't like ecchi stuff... ^_~

   Just one thing....I noticed that whenever two characters reached
climax, they screamed each others names. While this is certainly a
reasonable and likely thing for them to do, the frequency with which it
happens makes it look less like a "likely thing to say" and more like a
"biological necessity programmed into every human". Which is a fairly
strange thing.

Well... *shrug* It's changing a bit in the last one, somewhere, I think...
Ummmmm....

   You will be continuing the series, yes?

But of course! ... when I start the next story...

Kun-chan...