Hey Joyce, interesting story in a depressing way. I would think Lita 
would be stronger willed then that and pound her boyfriend's ass for even 
suggesting this stuff.  Nabiki seemed cold, okay more like a statue that 
gets the job done.  What happened to the both of them?  Wonder how the 
other scouts will react if/when they find out about this.  The scene 
where you have her mind sort of leave her body reminds me of something I 
once heard on a talk show. Someone said that abused children, sexually 
abused I think, focus on some object or chant and block out what happens 
to them.  Okay I am curious as to what would motivate you to write this 
story, let alone thinking up the scenerio in the first place. I will 
probably read the next part just to find out why is this happening.