Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] Desperate Measures [sort of a lemon]
From: jenn@netcom.com (Jennifer Lee Hom)
Date: 5/2/1996, 3:40 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

That was depressing.  And it was made more depressing because it
seemed so realistic.  I had a sinking feeling when I started to
realize what the job was early in the story, but what made Lita so
desperate?  She's usually so strong, and generally sticks up for
herself.  She seemed almost ... beaten, defeated by her troubles in
life, as if she had nothing left to lose.  She gave in so easily.

It was a good story, even though it wasn't a happy one.  Not all
stories end happily, and not all stories should.  

I'd like to see what happened to make Lita this desperate, and what
happens after this incident, if you're planning on continuing with
this storyline ...