From:        Joyce 'Azusa' Torres, Sailor Slacker, z3b56@ttacs1.ttu.edu

  This has had some revision, but it could use some more.  I would 
appreciate any comments at all on this.  I mean that.  Any comments.  
Anything.  This is the story listed beside my name for the Fanfic panel 
at A-kon, and I'd like to have it up on r.a.a.c. by then.

  DISCLAIMER: I don't usually write lemons.  This is the only lemon I've 
written, and the lemon scenes are in it only because I felt they were 
necessary for the story.  I was no more explicit than I thought the story 
warranted.

  NOTE: _BIG_ note:  I am not, have never been, and will never be involved 
in the profession mentioned in this fanfic!  (It's a STORY, not an 
AUTOBIOGRAPHY!!)  Just so you know.
  Enjoy or something.

Or something. <wan smiley>

I found this story pretty disturbing... as I think I was meant to. I'm 
not going to argue that this kind of story should never be written... and 
I don't know Lita well enough to say if this is in character for her. I 
do think this is out of character for Nabiki; I doubt even she would go 
that far to make money, and even her infamous pictures have been only 
PG-13 rated.

Without knowing Lita that well, it's hard to say, but from what I *have* 
heard it seems she gave in too easily.

Other than that, a pretty powerful fic. If you want, I'll do more 
detailed C&C... heck, I'll even do a W&F. <another wan grin>



Travis Butler
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