Two people wrote:

There was a problem with the formatting of your story, the last lines of
some of the individual sections were cut off.

Either you or the fanfic.com goofed because you fanfict got cut of in the
middle of a word several times.

*sigh* That was done on purpose. As a means of reenforcing the suddeness
and finality of it. I guess I'm gonna have to make that more clear in the
beta.

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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