Subject: BGCrush
From: Nightelf
Date: 4/27/1996, 5:39 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


Looks like a good story...lots of suspense piled on top, with a 
potentially power-shifting piece of tech in the balance.  One problem.  
I recieved pts. 1, 2, 9, and 10.  It was really confusing to go from a 
conference on a phasing device to hearing about one Linna's death and 
two Mackies and Nenes running around.  What happened to the other parts?

Nightelf
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu