At 12:16 AM 4/18/96 -0700, you wrote:

Not much to say.  It was a really good story.  However, the setting seem to

make 

the development for romance even harder (as if it wasn't hard enough

already).  

Since I don't know much about mechwarrior, I won't argue about the technical 
specs of your fanfic.  By the way, I really love having Shampoo in love with 
Mousse and being ignored by Mousse.  It is about time Shampoo pays for

being so 

cold to Mousse all the time! Keep up the good work!

        I like the idea of Shampoo chasing Mousse as well (that's why I used
it!), but they _might_ end up together (if I'm in a good mood when I get to
that point.  Heh. . . heh. . . ^_^)

        By the way, you say you like RPGs, right?  We'll so do I (18th level
Elven Fighter/Mage in AD&D), and I plan on writing an AD&D style Ranma when
I'm done with Mechwarrior.  I have the first chapter done, and if you'd
like, I'll send you a copy.  But, if I do, you _can't_ show it to anyone
else until I post it to the ML.  Okay?

        J.C.