Nicely written cyberpunkish drama. New proof that an exciting futuristic 
fanfic DOESN'T necessarily have to have gunfire on every page. The 
corporate intrigue angle is a fairly fresh one, at least with the 
hero/protagonist as the CEO. Well written, readable writting style. 
Dialogue was believable and unstilted, and I particularly liked the end 
bit (the conversation in the sedan). I hope to see more, soon.

-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle

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