Subject: Re: [FanFic] The thread that just would not die...(was something else don't ask me I just work here...)
From: Ben Kosse
Date: 4/5/1996, 11:18 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

   Da Poker Game is alive. It's breathing is normal and the doctor 
expects to release another part of it by the end of the weekend. 
Barring any kind of accidental deletion of said patient and any other 
things that would sway his judgement for such patient such as getting 
something called a life outside the house and away from the computer. 
Full patient recovery should be in about two weeks of course said 
problems mentioned above could hinder the doctor's speed.

   (author twitches.....)

   The eps of ER was good last night what can I say? ;)
     Nothing personal, but you have a grammatical error in above sentence.
This is correct:
   Barring any kind of accidental deletion of said patient and any other 
   things that would sway his judgement for such patient such as getting 
   something called a life outside the house and away from the computer,
   full patient recovery should be in about two weeks. Of course, said 
   problems mentioned above could hinder the doctor's speed.

Barring....computer.  was a sentence fragment.
Full ....speed.  was a run-on centence with a missing comma after "course".

You'd think that doctors would have better english.... God knows they need
something to offset the handwriting. :)

(This post, as yours, is to be taken as humor, which I have a very bad
sense of) <--Now, how's that for a sentence to kill an english teacher. :)
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