Hmmm...

Ukyou's dying from some wasting disease...and leaves the restaurant to the
rest of the Nerima Demolition Crew.  Overall, a good fic...but I have a
problem with it.

Ukyou is 17 (or around there, anyway).  Also, she's a bit of a spitfire.
I seriously doubt she'd be resigned to her death so quickly and easily.  She
might ask for help or support, and might write out a will just in case, but
she wouldn't go so far as to just give up after being sick only three days.

Nightelf
nwl9354@tamvm1.tamu.edu

"Lost in thought...and lost in time..."
-Pink Floyd, "Coming Back to Life"

    Ah. A most intelligent reply. Fear not, within the the second 
half of the story lies the truth. But I can tell you this; The way 
this disease works is much like the way I give out my opinions: hard 
fast and straight to the chops. The disease takes six days to kill 
it's host and by the third day (where Ukyou is) most of the fight is 
taken out of the victim. I've heard of persons dying of a terminal 
disease suffering some sort of revelation and basically accepting the 
fact. Since this particular disease works so fast, it seemed logical 
that Ukyou would reach that point much sooner than expected. Also, 
the disease acts very much like the flu or, say, a bad head cold. 
Half the reason why Ukyou seemed so resigned was because she wasn't 
quite all there upstairs, ya see?
                                        
                                        
                                      Thanx for the comment
                                                ---Erin 2.5