On Thu, 7 Mar 1996, Erik L. Schweitzer wrote:

I couldn't find your emial address, so I hope the list dosen't mind my
spamming the list with this.
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I like the addition of Kasumi's` flashback to when Genma told Soun about
the agreement was off.  Nice touch.
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You *really* want to make Ranma the one that has  a thing for his sibling,
don't you? ;)

Huh? Don't you mean Ranko for her sibling?


Waaah! I prinited this fic out before a bunch of these changes were made! 
60 pages, wasted! Now I have to print it out again!
Ah, well. It's worth it, I guess. This is prolly the best fic I've ever 
read. :)

Oh, and one last thing (though incredibly minor.) Watch your comma 
placement around words like 'bro' and 'sis'. Very often the sentence 
requires a comma beofre or after the word...makes it flow better. (Like I 
said, minor.)

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