On Tue, 5 Mar 1996, Foxx wrote:
What did I do? Was it a good thing? I guess it was... For those who have
sent me stories in private for me to read and send back comments... it might
be a while... I'm kinda overloaded.
Rob, you suggested the title, 'member?
I've been so preoccupied that I forgot! D'oh! Gald I could help!
Here's that outline for Rising Star I have drawn up(WW get off my back
about it!!)
Chapter 0 : Band Formation (introduction of characters and how they get
to Nerima)
Part 1 : Scorpio Zodiak. Leader Without a Band.
Part 2 : Virgo Celestra. Memories of a Forgotten Past.
Part 3 : Allegra Octavia and Musica Zodiak. A Missing Part. (Octavia)
Part 4 : Jody Zodiac. Shadows of the Heart.
Part 5 : Rumiko Sarugakure. The Secrets in the Dark.
Chapter 1 : "Ranma no baka!" Living in the Basement of the Tendos.
Chapter 2 : "Tsubasa Kurenai? What a man!" (Allegra meets Tsubasa)
Chapter ? : Two Ships Passing in the Night. (You've seen part of it!
Thanks, Matt!)
Chapter ? : The Sins of the Past. (How Jody scarred Allegra's face and the
consequence she must face. Banishment from the
Band, how Yar began to corrupt her. Past history
from a year ago.)
Chapter ? : Return to Madness. (Virgo's memory blocks are destroyed,
and the greatest fighter in the Band goes out of control. As her past
floods into her mind and drives her insane, Zodiak must choose to
either reveal to the Tendos and Saotomes the existance of the Band
to save her or to destroy her before she destroys Nerima and the Band)
Chapter ? : How the Light Died. (Basicly, how a man with a green eye
destroyed the Zodiak family. What drives Jody
to seek this man, etc. Every character has
ties to the man who wants to destroy the
Band. Past history)
Chapter ? : Redemption. At What Price Vengeance? (How Jody saves
herself from her evil by betraying her master and lies near
death as the Band tries to get to her.)
Chapter ? : Nerima 2021. ("The Band's mission was to protect the heirs
of the School of Anything-Goes Martial Arts from all outside
dangers they could not protect themselves from until the "Star
Rises." They failed. Now the only surviving member of the
Band must go back and save them from one who has already
altered their past to destroy them.
And I wanted to make it a comedy! I'm in trouble now!
Robma "Tell me what you think... (listens to one response) I can go and
do WHAT to myself?!" Orick
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Virgo: Does "Twilight have to fall," first?
Zodiak: That's what he said...
Allegra: We are still going to be a comedy, right?
Musica: i hope so...
Rumiko: We'd better be! Or Miss Orick and I are having a little talk...
Jody: You and me both, sister!