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place.  However... the ladies haven't show up yet."

shown

platinum-blond woman in a rather proffesional business outfit.

professional

URD:      I'm Urd.  Just Urd.  My job?  Um... relationship councilor.

counselor

  "Hey, what's this..."  She picked up a letter.  Hm... adressed to 

addressed

RANMA:   So go ahead and pick a room.  There's plenty upstairs and downstairs
        still empty.

downstairs is still 

ATARU:   You too?  What a coincidence!  In fact, your bedroom will probbably

probably

     to a woman (20s?), although she prefers the younge look.  She's usually

younger

     busy with scientific studies and I don't recall her ever really loosing

losing

     She's somewhat naiive and innocent, and incredibly destructive in

naive


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