Subject: Re: [FanFic] [fanfic]Ranma: Rain Dance
From: robin@spp.quintar.com (Robin Page)
Date: 12/18/1995, 11:27 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

On Mon, 18 Dec 1995, Matthew Trotter wrote:
[1] Its never a good idea to upset the plans of gods.  Its realy bad if 

really.

It's (it is) twice

   Doubt looked wearily at the shoe, he'd been hit with his fair share of 

warily

Is he tired (wearily) or cautious (warily)?

"Are you sure your name isn't Nievety?"

Naivety or Naivete (either is correct)

If felt like winter.  She thought she could see her breath.  Of all

It 

  "Hey man," puff, "The futures so bright, I gotta wear shades."

future's

Robin
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