Yes Nabiki's on the case now! Can Ranma keep his secret?
This chapter flowed a bit more smoothly than the third, are the chapters too
short though? I'm having difficulty keeping them the size they are now.
Perhaps when I've finalise the plot, I can come back and insert some more?

Anyway, did the teaching part work, having only memories of what my brother
told me about his kick boxing lessons!, I am unsure of the accuracy. Any
pointers here would be appreciated, basically I was just trying to show a
different side of Ranma. Hopefully this whole experience will change him
slightly for the better? Well maybe!

I do think the chapters are a little too short - a bit more of anything
would be good.

The teaching made sense to me, and I don't know anything about teaching or
learning martial arts - so that's gotta be a good sign. :}

AlberCrombie
                                                                           
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