OK, one little problem... Ranma-cat would sence Cologne sneeking up
on him, and she would not be able to just knock him out... she CAN'T
beat Ranma-cat..
Yeah, but Ranma-neko was so 'happy' and involved on killing
Shampoo-neko that she wasn't paying all that much attetnion to her
surroundings. If you were doing the one thing you wanted to do
most in the world, I think you'd blank out anything else, too.
LOVED, AND HATED the end of the chapter where Ryoga ENTERS THE
STORY.... " WHY DO YOU HAVE TO DO THAT TO US AGAIN & AGAIN ? "
It ensures me that those that don't like my writing
much, but prefer my plot stay read the next chapter. And I
can't seem able to end a chapter 'nicely'.
And I do post the chapter at the most two days later,
unlike SOME people I know... (Of course I'm not talking about
you, Brian! ;))
Well, when you write your first book, can i be a beta reader??? I
think if you write as good as this at 13, your going to be AMAISING
at 18!!
Ever thought that I might just stay the way I am, and
not improve at all?
Isabel Arantes