On Sun, 15 Oct 1995, Bert Van Vliet wrote:

No, not at all.  You're a romantic.  He's a dreamer.  (That's a good 
thing, don't worry.)

Could you define this difference a little better?  Thanks.  :)

I'll try.  Both of you have written using the same characters before.  
I'm talking about the way you treated them.  Hitomi wanted to write about 
the relationship between them.  You wrote about what was happening around 
them more.  

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"I don't have to eat it to know it's toxic."